Short Poem

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FranktheFrank
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Short Poem

#1 Post by FranktheFrank » 19 May 2019, 03:16

Tall waving woman
thighs clad in silver bark trunks
leaving the forest

Michael (MV)
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#2 Post by Michael (MV) » 19 May 2019, 08:07

1/ ,perhaps this is an image of empowerment

2/ or a haute couture fantasy fashion show
with the models upstaging the forest as they advance the runway


but then 1 would also be the statement of 2

the fashion statement

😎

Michael (MV)

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Re: Short Poem

#3 Post by FranktheFrank » 19 May 2019, 11:21

I got carried away. :)

BobBradshaw
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Re: Short Poem

#4 Post by BobBradshaw » 19 May 2019, 20:46

I like it

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