prelude without conclude

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Michael (MV)
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prelude without conclude

#1 Post by Michael (MV) » 19 May 2019, 21:11


every grave
cenotaphic

with the epitaph
for all us
rolling stones

"Start me up
I'll never stop

never stop,"
Non stop able

since I am created
stopless - Thanks to the Savior
of the sun & moon - Our Father kindly
made Death drop dead for me,

Not "only live once."
Born once alive
and living forever

Once upon a time
I was born
and it was just like
an extended sleep-over
and without a bedtime story in between
I am
living
ever after

Always home bound turned-on
never to be turned off
The Heart plays upon the rock
free of earthbound

the child lifted from the sleeper
skipping stones
without missing a beat

FranktheFrank
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Location: Between the mountains and the sea

Re: epitaphic

#2 Post by FranktheFrank » 19 May 2019, 21:48

Heart and home are big in your work Michael.
I have a similar theme I am working on for June.
I like the theme, applicable for our age.

Kenneth2816
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Joined: 01 Jun 2008, 09:17

Re: prelude without conclude

#3 Post by Kenneth2816 » 24 May 2019, 01:27

Longest poem I think I've seen from you. There are do me good moments in this

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