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Impossible Love
Posted: 20 Jun 2019, 05:37
by MariadelosangelesC7Mendez
Impossible Love
Maybe there is no tomorrow
only now perhaps
Neither you or me have the time
but the desire
always awaiting as set in fire
hours ending again
Re: Impossible Love
Posted: 20 Jun 2019, 06:06
by Kenneth2816
Nice first poem. I like how you play with time/hours/now/no tomorrow. Makes it all seem almost stolen love.
I wouldn't mind a stanza or two more, but brevity has its place. Welcome to the Block.
Re: Impossible Love
Posted: 20 Jun 2019, 20:27
by BobBradshaw
I echo Ken...nice
Re: Impossible Love
Posted: 21 Jun 2019, 00:46
by FranktheFrank
Welcome to the Writer's Block.
Neat poem.
Re: Impossible Love
Posted: 21 Jun 2019, 04:31
by MariadelosangelesC7Mendez
I appreciate your comments. I am so honored to be part of this group; I look forward to contributing to it as well as to be enriched by your work.
Re: Impossible Love
Posted: 21 Jun 2019, 07:22
by meenas17
Short and sweet.
Good poem.
Re: Impossible Love
Posted: 21 Jun 2019, 12:10
by FranktheFrank
Marvellous response Maria
I am sure you will enhance our forum.
Re: Impossible Love
Posted: 22 Jun 2019, 11:50
by Michael (MV)
Welcome Maria.
Here are poets & poems you can learn from.
Michael (MV)