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i love the way you say goodbye

Posted: 22 Sep 2019, 20:41
by Billy
i love the way you say goodbye

not a tease
nor a tear wiped away
that isn’t really there

a raised hand
like a white flag
when all is lost

lips utter words
i can’t decipher
but know by heart

walking into a shadow
looking back
your face indelible

you always return
with more tears
than can be wiped away

Re: i love the way you say goodbye

Posted: 23 Sep 2019, 04:15
by Kenneth2816
Been there. You nailed the cyclical nature.Good, very real

Re: i love the way you say goodbye

Posted: 23 Sep 2019, 04:43
by BobBradshaw
Well said....I like the subtle way you handle this

Re: i love the way you say goodbye

Posted: 03 Oct 2019, 06:40
by Billy
Thanks Ken and Bob