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The Brownings

Posted: 28 Apr 2020, 07:49
by BobBradshaw
The Brownings


Wasn’t Ba's life just paper, letters
and poems?
Robert wasn’t in love with her
Ba said but with her writings.

She feared disappointing him
when she was merely
a frail wife anchored to a sofa.

Yet here he was,
month after month, coaxing her
to stand, to walk, to live…

And how were they to live,
Robert with no more concept
of managing money than a fountain
with its glittering change—

but there was no turning back.
Robert’s nature was to help.
They were like vines intertwined,
supporting each other.

His love, though ardent,
wasn’t a passion like so many others’,
wine doused into a pan
dissipating in a moment’s heat.

He assured her, they would share
their lives forever, lying down
at the end together like a closing couplet
in a Shakespearean sonnet.

Re: The Brownings

Posted: 03 May 2020, 00:35
by BobBradshaw
Hi Michael, I am not available for an ibpc nom this month.

Stay safe.

Re: The Brownings

Posted: 07 May 2020, 21:57
by BobBradshaw
One person suggested cutting the opening 2 lines. Your thoughts?