All Lives Matter

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Michael (MV)
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All Lives Matter

#1 Post by Michael (MV) » 26 Nov 2020, 02:39

 
not even
a mask

can cease
the spread

of a contagious
HeArt-felt smile

going viral
over the flat line

like where the sun is always
with you over the horizon

 
 
 
 
 

Kenneth2816
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Re: All Lives Matter

#2 Post by Kenneth2816 » 26 Nov 2020, 07:18

I hope this id about Trump losing. It's exactly how I feel 😎

BobBradshaw
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Re: All Lives Matter

#3 Post by BobBradshaw » 27 Nov 2020, 23:35

A nice uplifting poem....enjoyed, Michael

RamanathanSiva
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Joined: 28 Aug 2020, 23:11

Re: All Lives Matter

#4 Post by RamanathanSiva » 06 Dec 2020, 10:28

Given the previous lines, the last lines don't sound like a platitude.

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