Listing my requirements
I call my grocer
who records my message
delivers the goods
at the doorstep.
So does my tailor
who pays a visit
either to take orders
or deliver the same
at home.
That could be said of the
famous Saree house
who send in the new arrivals,
I decide, he then sends the bill
with matching blouse material.
Such is the way I go about
with my credibility holding high
the vendors do not bother me
nor do I compare the prices.
It is mutual trust that reigns.
It Is Credibility
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Re: It Is Credibility
The contrasts between your culture and this one is interesting...both the pros and cons. This one being a thumb's up. I would look to strengthen the verbs, and to enhance on the actions...give us details, for example the spices, the type of rice, etc.
Re: It Is Credibility
I did want to give the details but felt it would become too elaborate.
I will post a revision with the names of the spices and the varieties of rice I order.
Thanks, Bob.
I will post a revision with the names of the spices and the varieties of rice I order.
Thanks, Bob.
meenas17