Senryu About Ships on Christmas Day

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FranktheFrank
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Senryu About Ships on Christmas Day

#1 Post by FranktheFrank » 25 Dec 2023, 21:11

Shepherds watched choirs
of angels descend to sing
from their space shuttle

BobBradshaw
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Re: Senryu About Ships on Christmas Day

#2 Post by BobBradshaw » 26 Dec 2023, 00:51

Ha! Nice one

Michael (MV)
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Re: Senryu About Ships on Christmas Day

#3 Post by Michael (MV) » 26 Dec 2023, 04:26

Frank, Merry ⭐ Christmas

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An adorable of the shepherds for the cyber space age

Frëre Noël (MV)

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Re: Senryu About Ships on Christmas Day

#4 Post by FranktheFrank » 26 Dec 2023, 13:35

To you too, Michael, it been many years we've wished peace on this celebratory day.

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