September IBPC 2017 Poems (Congrats Bernie 2nd Place)

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Michael (MV)
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September IBPC 2017 Poems (Congrats Bernie 2nd Place)

#1 Post by Michael (MV) » 09 Nov 2017, 23:38

 
Congrats to The Writer's Block - Thanks Bernie for bringing another IBPC recognition to the WB.



and Congrats to our fellow-poets recognized from other IBPC boards, especially

to Siva for the 3rd Place poem.


September IBPC poems selected by Tim Mayo with commentary:

http://ibpc.webdelsol.com/2017/09



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Michael (MV)


 

 
 
  
 
 
  
 

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Re: September IBPC 2017 Poems (Congrats Bernie 2nd Place)

#2 Post by FranktheFrank » 09 Nov 2017, 23:58

Congratulations Bernie
very well done, second place marvellous.

Congratulations to all who were placed from other boards.

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Re: September IBPC 2017 Poems (Congrats Bernie 2nd Place)

#3 Post by SivaVelliangiri » 10 Nov 2017, 13:48

Congratulations Bernie and all those who were placed from other boards.

Thank you Michael and Bernie and Frank.

Frank you are always right when it comes to editing. Seeing so many commas in the last stanza --I wish I had removed all those commas, then there would not have been so many pauses and the meaning would have been clearer.

S

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Re: September IBPC 2017 Poems (Congrats Bernie 2nd Place)

#4 Post by Kenneth2816 » 10 Nov 2017, 17:09

Congrats and appreciation to Bernie. Very proud.

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Re: September IBPC 2017 Poems (Congrats Bernie 2nd Place)

#5 Post by Kenneth2816 » 10 Nov 2017, 18:41

And Siva....congrats to you as well

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#6 Post by SivaVelliangiri » 10 Nov 2017, 20:01

Thank you Kenneth.

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Re: September IBPC 2017 Poems (Congrats Bernie 2nd Place)

#7 Post by meenas17 » 11 Nov 2017, 18:12

Congrats, Bernie. You deserve it.
meenas17

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Re: September IBPC 2017 Poems (Congrats Bernie 2nd Place)

#8 Post by Gracy321 » 12 Nov 2017, 04:01

Fantastic, Bernie! Great poem, well deserved recognition.

Also, congrats to Siva, representing another board.

I just read all the poems and Tim Mayo's comments. Thanks for link, MV.

Best to all,
Gracy :D

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Re: September IBPC 2017 Poems (Congrats Bernie 2nd Place)

#9 Post by SivaVelliangiri » 14 Nov 2017, 21:31

Thank you Gracy.

Siva

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Re: September IBPC 2017 Poems (Congrats Bernie 2nd Place)

#10 Post by BobBradshaw » 18 Nov 2017, 23:01

Congrats, Bernie! You deserved recognition for such a gorgeous piece...best

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Re: September IBPC 2017 Poems (Congrats Bernie 2nd Place)

#11 Post by FranktheFrank » 24 Nov 2017, 18:01

Commas or not, you won a good placing Siva
and you deserved it. If it wasn't for the maestro
you would have been second. :)

Commas can wait, 3rd places are rare.

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Re: September IBPC 2017 Poems (Congrats Bernie 2nd Place)

#12 Post by Bernie01 » 28 Nov 2017, 22:54

Guys---

Gosh.

sorry to be so slow as...can be. must be my age.

bernie

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