September IBPC 2017 Poems (Congrats Bernie 2nd Place)
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September IBPC 2017 Poems (Congrats Bernie 2nd Place)
Congrats to The Writer's Block - Thanks Bernie for bringing another IBPC recognition to the WB.
and Congrats to our fellow-poets recognized from other IBPC boards, especially
to Siva for the 3rd Place poem.
September IBPC poems selected by Tim Mayo with commentary:
http://ibpc.webdelsol.com/2017/09
Michael (MV)
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Re: September IBPC 2017 Poems (Congrats Bernie 2nd Place)
Congratulations Bernie
very well done, second place marvellous.
Congratulations to all who were placed from other boards.
very well done, second place marvellous.
Congratulations to all who were placed from other boards.
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Re: September IBPC 2017 Poems (Congrats Bernie 2nd Place)
Congratulations Bernie and all those who were placed from other boards.
Thank you Michael and Bernie and Frank.
Frank you are always right when it comes to editing. Seeing so many commas in the last stanza --I wish I had removed all those commas, then there would not have been so many pauses and the meaning would have been clearer.
S
Thank you Michael and Bernie and Frank.
Frank you are always right when it comes to editing. Seeing so many commas in the last stanza --I wish I had removed all those commas, then there would not have been so many pauses and the meaning would have been clearer.
S
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Re: September IBPC 2017 Poems (Congrats Bernie 2nd Place)
Congrats and appreciation to Bernie. Very proud.
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Re: September IBPC 2017 Poems (Congrats Bernie 2nd Place)
And Siva....congrats to you as well
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Re: September IBPC 2017 Poems (Congrats Bernie 2nd Place)
Thank you Kenneth.
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Congrats, Bernie. You deserve it.
meenas17
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Fantastic, Bernie! Great poem, well deserved recognition.
Also, congrats to Siva, representing another board.
I just read all the poems and Tim Mayo's comments. Thanks for link, MV.
Best to all,
Gracy
Also, congrats to Siva, representing another board.
I just read all the poems and Tim Mayo's comments. Thanks for link, MV.
Best to all,
Gracy
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Thank you Gracy.
Siva
Siva
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Re: September IBPC 2017 Poems (Congrats Bernie 2nd Place)
Congrats, Bernie! You deserved recognition for such a gorgeous piece...best
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Re: September IBPC 2017 Poems (Congrats Bernie 2nd Place)
Commas or not, you won a good placing Siva
and you deserved it. If it wasn't for the maestro
you would have been second.
Commas can wait, 3rd places are rare.
and you deserved it. If it wasn't for the maestro
you would have been second.
Commas can wait, 3rd places are rare.
Re: September IBPC 2017 Poems (Congrats Bernie 2nd Place)
Guys---
Gosh.
sorry to be so slow as...can be. must be my age.
bernie
Gosh.
sorry to be so slow as...can be. must be my age.
bernie