"I thank this rock and roll for the freedom it's given me"

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Michael (MV)
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"I thank this rock and roll for the freedom it's given me"

#1 Post by Michael (MV) » 15 Oct 2017, 20:25

 

 

                                                                                                                                  Petty
                                                                                                                            he's not petty


                                                                                                                        unfussy rock star un
                                                                                                             pretty voice - unpettied - just Tom


                                                                                                                                  Petty
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
  
 
 
  
 
 
 
 

Kenneth2816
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Re: "anti-arty"

#2 Post by Kenneth2816 » 16 Oct 2017, 05:58

Not familiar with the syle?

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Re: "anti-artsy"

#3 Post by Gracy321 » 18 Oct 2017, 09:45

Maybe it's dadaism ? Anyway, I've just had the pleasure of listening to Tom Petty, so thank you for that, Bernie.
R.I.P. Tom Petty, who died about 3 days ago.
Best, Gracy


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s5BJXwNeKsQ

Michael (MV)
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Re: "I thank this rock and roll for the freedom it's given"

#4 Post by Michael (MV) » 31 Oct 2017, 23:19

 
Before this October disappears:


Thanks Gracy321; Thanks Kenneth; (et al)


I had hoped - much sooner - to respond & elaborate about this cinquain-poem -

and I hope still to do so


It has been well-received at other forums,


as I continue relishing being the conduit for this cinquain-poem


8)

Michael (MV)

 
 
 
 
 
 

Kenneth2816
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Re: "I thank this rock and roll for the freedom it's given"

#5 Post by Kenneth2816 » 01 Nov 2017, 06:55

Thanks for elaborating. I'll have to read up

Gracy321
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Re: "I thank this rock and roll for the freedom it's given m

#6 Post by Gracy321 » 14 Nov 2017, 00:05

Hi again, MV.
I knew about cinquains. Written some myself. What muddled me is the title, which is very long.
I know about cinquains using the first line as a title, which indeed you do, but then you put a totally different title above.
Anyway, I'm very glad it has been well received in other forums. Congrats!
Best, Gracy

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