V2:
Lois Lane In Love
He’s always diving out an open window
waving goodbye,
but when he does find time for a quick
kiss, a surge of energy floods
my nerves. It's like a power surge
after an outage,
every suburb in my body
lighting up. All night as he circles
the planet, saving Paris, New Delhi,
Minneapolis, I lie on my bed,
adrift in dreams, a cruise ship
on a dark sea, its portals
brightly lit
V1:
Superman and Lois Lane
Just as I think I'm beginning to crack
that boulder in his chest
his phone rings.
"Sorry, Lois. I have to take this…"
and suddenly he's diving out
an open window, waving g'bye.
When he does find time for a quick
kiss, a surge of energy floods
my nerves. It's like a power outage
and suddenly the power grid is online
again, every suburb in my body
lighting up. All night as he circles
the planet, saving Paris, New Delhi,
Minneapolis, I lie on my bed,
adrift in dreams, a cruise ship
on a dark sea, its portals
brightly lit
Lois Lane In Love
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Re: Lois Lane In Love
Had to google Lois Lane,but still cannot relate to the nuances.
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Re: Lois Lane In Love
Really? Cultural gap...lol...you've never seen a Superman movie or tv series or read a Superman comic? You have better tastes than I have!
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Re: Lois Lane In Love
I smiled. There are nice and stunningly new word combinations in this poem. One moment caught .
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