It's a Wrap not Just a Tie

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FranktheFrank
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It's a Wrap not Just a Tie

#1 Post by FranktheFrank » 06 Sep 2018, 11:28

I grabbed Mal by the tie
and was amazed to see it come off in my hand.

'It's elasticated, said Mal,
it stops the drunks winding me up,
taking me prisoner, it's embarrassing
being tied to a pump handle.'

Then he grabbed me by my tie,
wrapped it around the pump handle.
'You get my drift,' says Mal cheerly.

Michael (MV)
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Re: It's a Wrap not Just a Tie

#2 Post by Michael (MV) » 06 Sep 2018, 11:48

 
Hi Frank,

the tie that wraps

Christo's next city-scape installation: Wall Street wrapped in silk ties   :)


Life
the gift
that's never wrapped up & tied


8)

Michael (MV)

 
 
 
 

FranktheFrank
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Re: It's a Wrap not Just a Tie

#3 Post by FranktheFrank » 07 Sep 2018, 01:48

That's funny Michael.
I've seen artists wrap hole buildings.

BobBradshaw
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Re: It's a Wrap not Just a Tie

#4 Post by BobBradshaw » 07 Sep 2018, 21:20

Clever...enjoyed

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