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by Kenneth2816
22 Apr 2019, 21:27
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: My First Book of Poems has been published.
Replies: 3
Views: 167

Re: My First Book of Poems has been published.

Wow. Where van we get one? Congratulations
by Kenneth2816
22 Apr 2019, 20:47
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Belated April IBPC 2019 thread:
Replies: 22
Views: 398

Re: Belated April IBPC 2019 thread:

Bees has,my vote if Meenas misses out
by Kenneth2816
21 Apr 2019, 23:16
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Belated April IBPC 2019 thread:
Replies: 22
Views: 398

Re: Belated April IBPC 2019 thread:

No poem of mine is representing any other forum
by Kenneth2816
20 Apr 2019, 15:11
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Belated April IBPC 2019 thread:
Replies: 22
Views: 398

Re: Belated April IBPC 2019 thread:

Butterfly Effect Letter You lay n our bed, The backs of his Fingertips stroke The inside of your thigh Light as the delicate Pulse of a Painted Lady. I imagine your halting Breath, visions of Tidal waves, the two Of you buried in deluge. But you are safe from me now, distance of Mercators, at the fa...
by Kenneth2816
20 Apr 2019, 09:24
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Belated April IBPC 2019 thread:
Replies: 22
Views: 398

Re: Belated April IBPC 2019 thread:

I nominate Meenas History by a Lesser Known

2nd on Trysyting
by Kenneth2816
20 Apr 2019, 09:20
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Belated April IBPC 2019 thread:
Replies: 22
Views: 398

Re: Belated April IBPC 2019 thread:

I accept for Butterfly
by Kenneth2816
16 Apr 2019, 23:14
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Quasimodo
Replies: 12
Views: 512

Re: Quasimodo

Poignant and timely
by Kenneth2816
13 Apr 2019, 07:38
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Anti-Trump Day 2060
Replies: 3
Views: 397

Re: Anti-Trump Day 2060

If your goal was to mimic the fears of a right wing white nationalist, with a touch of evangelical delusion, Id say you succeeded. The sad part is, there are people in my country who will actually vote based on such paranoia. You have indeed captured the arrogance of those who claim to follow Christ...
by Kenneth2816
09 Apr 2019, 18:16
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Watching the Past Return
Replies: 4
Views: 427

Re: Watching the Past Return

Well I cannot say I share the passion but I like the poem
by Kenneth2816
07 Apr 2019, 07:47
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: 1953
Replies: 4
Views: 771

Re: 1953

Thanks
by Kenneth2816
01 Apr 2019, 01:07
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: 1953
Replies: 4
Views: 771

Re: 1953

Thanks Bob. It's pregnant with and overly dependent on era references. I've nor been able to focus much on writing lately. Still, better to wrote ten mediocre poems than none
by Kenneth2816
01 Apr 2019, 01:05
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: 'Rosebud' - Citizen Kane [edit 2 formerly No Voice]
Replies: 22
Views: 1975

Re: No Voice -edit 1

I think you mean trickling instead of tricking
by Kenneth2816
30 Mar 2019, 17:25
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: The Prisoner
Replies: 3
Views: 753

Re: The Prisoner

I like the ambition. Since this must be read using a template of Christ, it is difficult because of the abstraction. I would suggest not using He or Him using capital letters. I might also suggest more references like "skylight" to bring the surrealist tone more to the fore. There is good imaginatio...
by Kenneth2816
29 Mar 2019, 09:40
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: 'Rosebud' - Citizen Kane [edit 2 formerly No Voice]
Replies: 22
Views: 1975

Re: No Voice -edit 1

Proof that animals are better than us. Strong poem.
by Kenneth2816
29 Mar 2019, 09:38
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: John and Fanny
Replies: 5
Views: 888

Re: John and Fanny

Again, this is the genre you excel in. I see nothing to change
by Kenneth2816
29 Mar 2019, 09:36
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: 1953
Replies: 4
Views: 771

1953

Holy smoke, they croaked The Rosenbergs at Sing Sing. Now the Reds have the A Bomb. Monkies in space capsules, Warning sirens in town, Sonic booms that once, made My mother drop the meat loaf On the linoleum and swear. At school, the teacher conducted Duck-and-cover drills, her face A forced and dis...
by Kenneth2816
29 Mar 2019, 09:33
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Celestial Spectator (seperate stanzas)
Replies: 4
Views: 770

Re: Celestial Spectator

Wow. I agree about a stanza break.
by Kenneth2816
20 Mar 2019, 04:16
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming March IBPC 2019:
Replies: 15
Views: 2227

Re: Upcoming March IBPC 2019:

I apologize to the group. I did not see the nomination Marooned until yesterday. Thanks to those who selected it.
by Kenneth2816
15 Mar 2019, 10:19
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Butterfly Effect Letter
Replies: 8
Views: 1594

Re: Butterfly Effect Letter

Thanks Bob. Billly. Butterfly Effect 8s a chaos theory that states the fluttering of a butterfly wings can touch off a tsunami thousands of miles away. IDK if I believe it, but its that deluge .
by Kenneth2816
14 Mar 2019, 18:28
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Shed
Replies: 3
Views: 982

Re: Shed

Stark. This is not about solitude, it is about being lost and seeking some form of shelter and comfort . The hemp and rafters maybe give us a hint of the desperate mind set of the narrator. There are so many rules, one cannot keep them all. This works because narrator was not banished there but is t...

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