Yes, I agree with you Billy.
it is information with few titbits of fear surging while attempting to perform during those prescribed hours.
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- 17 Jan 2021, 14:36
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Good Timings
- Replies: 4
- Views: 198
- 17 Jan 2021, 14:35
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Good Timings
- Replies: 4
- Views: 198
Re: Good Timings
Thanks, Bob.
- 15 Jan 2021, 18:00
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Good Timings
- Replies: 4
- Views: 198
Good Timings
Governed by by auspicious time Rahukalam , Yemakandam Kuligai,Horai, followed by yogams Amirtha yogam, Siddhayogam , Maranayogam . Not to leave off the new moon day, Amavasai ,, full moon day, Paurnami ,, Ashtami , the eight day after new moon or Full moon, Navami , the ninth after the two moon days...
- 15 Jan 2021, 17:24
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Mozart Dying
- Replies: 5
- Views: 505
Re: Mozart Dying
Good poem, Bob. Not one of your best.
- 15 Jan 2021, 17:23
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Hollyhocks
- Replies: 3
- Views: 288
Re: Hollyhocks
it is gorgeous, as Bob says, from first to last.
- 14 Jan 2021, 17:43
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Kaliyuga
- Replies: 5
- Views: 436
Re: Kaliyuga
How can I compete with Yeats? Bob.
I did my best. I did work hard.
The imagery part goes missing.
Another exercise!
I did my best. I did work hard.
The imagery part goes missing.
Another exercise!
- 14 Jan 2021, 17:37
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Road I Never Cross
- Replies: 4
- Views: 294
Re: Road I Never Cross
It is an attempt, Bob. Learning to do something different.
Is it strained and artificial?
Is it strained and artificial?
- 12 Jan 2021, 19:44
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Road I Never Cross
- Replies: 4
- Views: 294
Road I Never Cross
Hard to go around doing chores day in and day out performing the same old in small or large dose turns killing. Sighing and heaving I go abou.t phone calls, guests dropping in between. I carry on, no doubt' with exhaustions interfering. It so happens this morn a trouble brews up all too sudden accus...
- 12 Jan 2021, 13:58
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Kaliyuga
- Replies: 5
- Views: 436
Re: Kaliyuga
Revised with Michael's suggestion in mind and after reading Yeats " Second Coming"
- 11 Jan 2021, 17:16
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Kaliyuga
- Replies: 5
- Views: 436
Re: Kaliyuga
Thanks, Michael.
Your workshopping lends an impetus to the poem.
I will revise accordingly.
I am familiar with Yeats but have not read the poem.
I will read and try to improve mine.
Your workshopping lends an impetus to the poem.
I will revise accordingly.
I am familiar with Yeats but have not read the poem.
I will read and try to improve mine.
- 10 Jan 2021, 18:17
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Kaliyuga
- Replies: 5
- Views: 436
Kaliyuga
Revision 1 Weathermen come up dry when asked why it rains this time of the year when the monsoon goes rear. The past year full of scare leaves the astrologers to glare at their prediction chart a miscalculation in short. Pulling their sleeves up gallantly their claim of indicating nonchalantly about...
- 10 Dec 2020, 18:17
- Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
- Topic: Upcoming December IBPC 2020:
- Replies: 12
- Views: 1802
Re: Upcoming December IBPC 2020:
Vey good choices, Michael.
Thanks for excluding my poem which Bob has nominated,
I know it is a poem but not one to represent the board.
Thanks Bob for your consistent encouragement.
Thanks for excluding my poem which Bob has nominated,
I know it is a poem but not one to represent the board.
Thanks Bob for your consistent encouragement.
- 07 Dec 2020, 21:13
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Sleep Amidst Noise
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1145
Sleep Amidst Noise
The dogs howl past midnight, barks go up in decibels, reach the heights terrible it sounds as fear looms I pull the quilt over while gloom shrouds me driving me to ends the hounds continue the trend. My quilt lends me the warmth needed in spite of it the body shivers unheeded. The noise progresses w...
- 07 Dec 2020, 21:11
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: The Way Of Coyote
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1786
Re: The Way Of Coyote
Billy,
I like the way you draw the analogy.
It is well crafted.
I like the way you draw the analogy.
It is well crafted.
- 07 Dec 2020, 19:57
- Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
- Topic: Upcoming December IBPC 2020:
- Replies: 12
- Views: 1802
Re: Upcoming December IBPC 2020:
Thanks, Bob for nominating my poem,
You are constantly pushing me to do better.
If Michael feels it is worthy, I will accept.
You are constantly pushing me to do better.
If Michael feels it is worthy, I will accept.
- 05 Dec 2020, 16:02
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Baffling Silence
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1003
Baffling Silence
Trees with huge branches stay dumb like big stone walls, leaves do not flutter nor rustle with a whiz, tweets of birds cannot be heard. Could this be a premonition? I wonder. Anything hazardous is on the anvil, I deliberate. Nothing at all it is hallucination haunting, I reconcile. Lost in thoughts ...
- 15 Nov 2020, 17:31
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: While I Was Burning
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2010
Re: While I Was Burning
I always like your poems, Ken.
- 14 Nov 2020, 18:31
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Long Hair Named Desire
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2328
Re: Long Hair Named Desire
I am trying to focus on imagery as you have suggested many times,
- 13 Nov 2020, 17:43
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Long Hair Named Desire
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2328
Re: Long Hair Named Desire
Ken,
Pleasant comment too!
Pleasant comment too!
- 13 Nov 2020, 17:42
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Long Hair Named Desire
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2328
Re: Long Hair Named Desire
Billy,
Could be, but we say so In India, if I am not mistaken.
Could be, but we say so In India, if I am not mistaken.
- 11 Nov 2020, 15:28
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Long Hair Named Desire
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2328
Long Hair Named Desire
I am fascinated by long hair one of my friends had, I do not know if she still has a very long hair, thick gleaming reached up to the knees, My short, soft, wavy hair looked so poorly beside hers. My mom plaited them when I was a kid. I tie my hair little above the neck held by a small black hair ba...
- 09 Nov 2020, 19:36
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Shivapuranam
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1775
Re: Shivapuranam
I miss the imagery part, Bob.
I have to pay attention.
I have to pay attention.
- 08 Nov 2020, 18:14
- Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
- Topic: Upcoming November IBPC 2020:
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3730
Re: Upcoming November IBPC 2020:
Name Meena email meenas17@gmail.com It is my original unpublished poem, I am not representing any other board. Navaratri Revision The dolls come down from the attic the young ones jump all over, the adults descend in style while the older stagger. They look colourful Krishna shimmers in blue while L...
- 07 Nov 2020, 20:33
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Shivapuranam
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1775
Shivapuranam
One son on the hills angered, the other one on the lap, complacent Shiva and Umayal retire to their abode, very much that of in every home. Having spent the days like the mortals. watching events, going out in their case in procession, dancing with passion being an entertainment, enjoying conjugalit...
- 06 Nov 2020, 09:36
- Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
- Topic: Upcoming November IBPC 2020:
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3730
Re: Upcoming November IBPC 2020:
Thanks for the nomination.
I accept.
I accept.