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by meenas17
09 Nov 2019, 20:46
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: One of A Rare Breed
Replies: 2
Views: 167

Re: One of A Rare Breed

Michael ( MV)
Very true.
Should be "One of A Common Breed"

Meena
by meenas17
08 Nov 2019, 20:46
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: One of A Rare Breed
Replies: 2
Views: 167

One of A Rare Breed

That one my cook had been with me for ten years,in an impulse calls quit.. Taken by surprise. I fail to seek the reason. He is temperamental goes off his head. turns quarrelsome finds fault with fellow workers. Fights with them. Screams and yells. He is an expert cook prepares dishes in no time and ...
by meenas17
08 Nov 2019, 20:11
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Walt Whitman, 1863
Replies: 7
Views: 340

Re: Walt Whitman, 1863

A good poem, Bob.
Each stanza is relevant,
One leads to the other, yet they stand out.
That be the beauty of the poem.
by meenas17
06 Nov 2019, 20:20
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: A Tryst
Replies: 6
Views: 631

Re: A Tryst

Ken, thanks for the understanding.
I keep getting such dreams very often nowadays.
This being one of them.
by meenas17
06 Nov 2019, 20:18
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: A Tryst
Replies: 6
Views: 631

Re: A Tryst

Judy, thanks for commenting.
I will look into the faults.
I state it is a dream.
Dreams do not have logic.
It is the subconscious that is working.
by meenas17
03 Nov 2019, 20:21
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: A Tryst
Replies: 6
Views: 631

A Tryst

Caught in between the traffic , I stand aghast. Wholly drenched, the clothes cling to the body. My feet trapped in the slush remains static. I attempt to pull them out, I slip and slope. Straighten myself stand all through unable to take a step. Rains turn torrential I go down slowly inch by inch. S...
by meenas17
03 Nov 2019, 19:46
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Across The River
Replies: 10
Views: 1134

Re: Across The River

Yes, Judy .
3 votes. thumbs up!
by meenas17
03 Nov 2019, 19:44
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Crossing Into South Carolina
Replies: 8
Views: 1783

Re: Crossing Into South Carolina

Quiet distracting .
by meenas17
29 Oct 2019, 06:08
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: A Sparrow Found (1917) - V2
Replies: 5
Views: 783

Re: A Sparrow Found (1917)

An elaborate one. Never once I lost interest.
by meenas17
29 Oct 2019, 06:06
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Planters Moon
Replies: 7
Views: 854

Re: Planters Moon

The last stanza is strong.
Man's inability to that of a worm's possibility.
Great imagery.
by meenas17
29 Oct 2019, 06:04
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Red Spider Lilies
Replies: 4
Views: 676

Re: Red Spider Lilies

Flowers extend companionship.
Well written.
by meenas17
25 Oct 2019, 15:35
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: A Maze I Am In
Replies: 9
Views: 832

Re: A Maze I Am In

Billy,

Your editing has unwound the maze I am in .
The version is an improvement of the first.
I go with it.
Thanks,
by meenas17
25 Oct 2019, 15:34
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: A Maze I Am In
Replies: 9
Views: 832

Re: A Maze I Am In

Judy, I do not know how to clear the obscurity.
I tried but failed.
by meenas17
25 Oct 2019, 15:32
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: A Maze I Am In
Replies: 9
Views: 832

Re: A Maze I Am In

Bob, I too feel the first one is better.
The revision is not at all good.
by meenas17
24 Oct 2019, 20:50
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: A Maze I Am In
Replies: 9
Views: 832

Re: A Maze I Am In

I have posted a revision, Hope it reads better.
by meenas17
24 Oct 2019, 07:26
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: A Maze I Am In
Replies: 9
Views: 832

A Maze I Am In

The retinue around me keeps vigil for what I do not know, They watch every move and every deal with uncanny insight, I am neither extraordinary nor foolish, in between both a very ordinary one. Those eyes behind my back chases me wherever I go. I converse with very few, even that is monitored. with ...
by meenas17
24 Oct 2019, 07:26
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Someone's Hallelujah (revised(
Replies: 10
Views: 930

Re: Someone's Hallelujah (revised(

Think you have done the maximum.
by meenas17
24 Oct 2019, 07:24
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Poet as Goldfish in a Pet Store
Replies: 13
Views: 1046

Re: Poet as Goldfish in a Pet Store

It is fine, Bob. Reached the level.
Needs no more.
by meenas17
23 Oct 2019, 19:22
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Neighbors
Replies: 9
Views: 796

Re: Neighbors

Judy, welcome to the board.
Your entry has brought a stream of poems.
The Board is bustling with activity.
I agree with you, Judy,
No poem is fictional.
The best of the poems bear at least a trace of personal info or experience.
by meenas17
23 Oct 2019, 19:15
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Pay At Your End
Replies: 6
Views: 631

Re: Pay At Your End

Judy, thanks for the edits.
I have inserted a dash and changed and to or.
by meenas17
23 Oct 2019, 19:11
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Pay At Your End
Replies: 6
Views: 631

Re: Pay At Your End

Thanks Bob.
A reflection of my experience.
by meenas17
23 Oct 2019, 19:11
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Pay At Your End
Replies: 6
Views: 631

Re: Pay At Your End

Very true! Ken.
Thanks for stopping by,
by meenas17
22 Oct 2019, 15:50
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Pay At Your End
Replies: 6
Views: 631

Pay At Your End

the words written in the post script of the same letter I posted. A comeback I read my letter, a simple demand to pay a few hundreds to an association. to my sibling, not a help anyway, a 0.0001% I hold in the business. Those four words sound command -like, express scorn, reward for being a sleeping...

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