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by lizlecrone
18 Jul 2014, 07:18
Forum: New York Pitch Conference Novel Execution Forum
Topic: Group II
Replies: 12
Views: 45082

Re: Group II

I second that sentiment and can't wait for more, Brittany :)
by lizlecrone
16 Jul 2014, 07:56
Forum: New York Pitch Conference Novel Execution Forum
Topic: Group II
Replies: 12
Views: 45082

Re: Group II

Excuse me for a moment while I just say, "Damn, girl." (And I mean that in the best, most amazing, most this is right up my alley I want to read it kind of way). Okay, that aside. The scene length and structure are great. The scene opens, evolves (quite spectacularly, I might add), and closes. You'v...
by lizlecrone
16 Jul 2014, 06:27
Forum: New York Pitch Conference Novel Execution Forum
Topic: Group II
Replies: 12
Views: 45082

Well, guys, I guess I'll be the first to kick off Group II

I'm handing over the first Part of my novel (Four chapters) so you have more to work with. Feel free to edit by chapter, or scene, whatever you guys have time for! Part I: The End of an Era I A weapon is only as deadly as the warrior that wields it. Kirren ducked and the sword whistled over his head...