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by fionamccarten
16 Jul 2014, 19:35
Forum: New York Pitch Conference Novel Execution Forum
Topic: Group II
Replies: 12
Views: 45071

Re: Group II

Hey Brittany! Wow. You're writing is so lyrical oh my goodness! You've provided the perfect snapshot into your story, and it's a perfect tone to set it up. As for criticism... hmm not much. I guess the same as Liz - there's some ambiguity because your writing is so fluid, but I feel like editing tha...
by fionamccarten
16 Jul 2014, 18:09
Forum: New York Pitch Conference Novel Execution Forum
Topic: Group II
Replies: 12
Views: 45071

Re: Group II

Hey Brittany, hey Liz! I'll start with Liz :) (Quick Question - Is this the entire prologue or just a part of it?) So I absolutely loved this - this kind of fantasy is right up my alley. You've managed to introduce a whole bunch of characters in a short period of time in a way that's clear and effec...