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by harry567
01 Jun 2017, 06:34
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Frosted Garden
Replies: 4
Views: 1171

Re: Frosted Garden

Thanks, You have given me a lot of possibilities...I'll let them marinate for a bit, and then try to take advantage of what you have offered. Thx for all the help! Bob



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by harry567
01 Jun 2017, 06:33
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: A Fortune Seeker
Replies: 7
Views: 1593

Re: A Fortune Seeker

Thanks, -- I will cut the acknowledging lines....




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by harry567
01 Jun 2017, 06:31
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Cowboy Novel in Japanese
Replies: 7
Views: 1879

Re: Cowboy Novel in Japanese

I really like the strong, action verbs in this poem. I like the use of colors as well. To get more emotion into the poem, you may want to get the narrator personally involved from the poem's beginning. That could give the final death a more personal impact...


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