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a pretty good little haiku moment.

Terrific poem. Not sure, but I might leave out "Archangel". I really doubt there is a paint with that name. It may be too contrived for your purposes.

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removed

pen, I really like the opening stanza and stanzas 3 and 5. I'm still thinking and rereading this interesting poem.

Billy