Oncology Ward

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FranktheFrank
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Joined:02 Mar 2016, 18:07
Oncology Ward

#1 Post by FranktheFrank »

Cold blue night at dawn
Waiting for the pain to ease
Is this how life ends
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BobBradshaw
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Joined:03 Jun 2016, 21:03

Re: Oncology Ward

#2 Post by BobBradshaw »

Good, short piece.
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Kenneth2816
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Joined:01 Jun 2008, 09:17

Re: Oncology Ward

#3 Post by Kenneth2816 »

This is stark and has the brevity of one who now
counts every minute.
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