Those Controversial Diamonds(removed)

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Those Controversial Diamonds(removed)

#1 Post by SivaRamanathan » 05 Jun 2013, 06:27

I thought that chunk of a paragraph could pass off as a prose poem,but after several readings it reads like bad prose.So I have removed it.
I will be more careful in future before posting.
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