"TransPo" (a poem created in translation)
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revised 7/25
tongue & imagination
Imagination over tongue
a stranger found from
a literary french kiss unbound
not strained & lost in an estranged mouth
free from accuracy to be creative
in the fold following the Translator
no longer foreign
familiar in the home of Our Father
tongue & Imagination
Imagination over tongue
a literary french kiss unbound
found not lost in
free following the Translator
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Re: "TransPo" (a poem created in translation)
Some words are wrap-arounds
to be enveloped in moistness
savoured by the tactile tongue
searched out for roughness
smoothed by much use
to be enveloped in moistness
savoured by the tactile tongue
searched out for roughness
smoothed by much use
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Re: "TransPo" (a poem created in translation)
Hi Frank,
Thanks for sharing your lines - yes, language is able to be as tactile as sculpture.
I have revised, stretched out
Michael (MV)
Thanks for sharing your lines - yes, language is able to be as tactile as sculpture.
I have revised, stretched out

Michael (MV)