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"TransPo"   (a poem created in translation)

Posted: 22 Jul 2014, 20:02
by Michael (MV)
 
revised 7/25


tongue & imagination
Imagination over tongue

a stranger found from
a literary french kiss unbound
not strained & lost in an estranged mouth

free from accuracy to be creative
in the fold following the Translator

no longer foreign
familiar in the home of Our Father





tongue & Imagination
Imagination over tongue
a literary french kiss unbound
found not lost in
free following the Translator
 
 
 
 
  
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

Re: "TransPo"   (a poem created in translation)

Posted: 24 Jul 2014, 00:21
by franklyfedup
Some words are wrap-arounds
to be enveloped in moistness
savoured by the tactile tongue
searched out for roughness
smoothed by much use

Re: "TransPo"   (a poem created in translation)

Posted: 27 Jul 2014, 04:35
by Michael (MV)
Hi Frank,

Thanks for sharing your lines - yes, language is able to be as tactile as sculpture.


I have revised, stretched out


8)

Michael (MV)