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FrankThird
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Til

mojave9999
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Re: Tilbury

#2 Post by mojave9999 »

Frank---


this reader is impatient, wants action:

Up from the hole,
grease monkeys half deaf
from the ship engine.

Oh for light and colour
to drive away darkness,
to pierce brightness into
exhausted lives

Oh! For a woman’s breath
even if shrill yet alive.




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FrankThird
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Tha

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