A Walk Through the Past

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FranktheFrank
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Location: Between the mountains and the sea

A Walk Through the Past

#1 Post by FranktheFrank » 09 Jul 2016, 15:20

The frosty air, clean
as a steel drum. Windmills turn
lethargically, a green hill
overlooks my walk. The sky,
a light blue, clear
of Me-109's.

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