Gopikrishna

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Gopikrishna

#1 Post by meenas17 » 01 Mar 2017, 11:15

Gopikrishna dances in the cosmic
tantalized stay the Gopis.
Bama and Rukmini are struck by Cupid's arrow.

The churning of curd comes to a still.
Their smile reddens their face
mind you not one of anger one of a stimulation.

Gopikrishna's music reverberates. The melody flows across.
The flute elicits a rhapsody. It cannot be sweeter.
It smothers, caresses and insinuates Bama and Rukmini.

Hundreds of the Gopis around stand muted.
Krishna plays a sequence abounds with amour
excitement and exuberance.

Seems the universe is enjoying. a rare enactment.
One of a harmony, synchronising the real and the virtual
a seamless correlation of the sensual and the divine.

A significance that manifests itself as a fusion.
it is love bearing testimony to the creation. Creativity cannot happen
without a passion-- anywhere, anytime
meenas17

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