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                                  flat lines aren't finish lines                                                    

                                                                                                        buried alive in the body bag of a serpent's belly

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kill the last line---no connection to light and it's a poor man dylan thomas...



but the first two lines, now we got something going.


consider making a passing reference to antiquity...challenge yourself...write five more lines....


bernie