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FranktheFrank
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Location: Between the mountains and the sea

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#1 Post by FranktheFrank » 06 Dec 2018, 12:40

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BobBradshaw
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Re: Christmas in Wales

#2 Post by BobBradshaw » 07 Dec 2018, 05:39

I love the lush details...I could quote anywhere...

When Simoom blew,
from the west, from beyond the Alboran Sea,
the town awoke to a covering of fine red dust
from the Sahara and brought thousands of swallows
and swifts piping, feeding on the wind.
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FranktheFrank
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Location: Between the mountains and the sea

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#3 Post by FranktheFrank » 07 Dec 2018, 06:30

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