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Impossible Love

Maybe there is no tomorrow
only now perhaps
Neither you or me have the time
but the desire
always awaiting as set in fire
hours ending again

Nice first poem. I like how you play with time/hours/now/no tomorrow. Makes it all seem almost stolen love.

I wouldn't mind a stanza or two more, but brevity has its place. Welcome to the Block.

I echo Ken...nice

Welcome to the Writer's Block.
Neat poem.

I appreciate your comments. I am so honored to be part of this group; I look forward to contributing to it as well as to be enriched by your work.

Short and sweet.
Good poem.

Marvellous response Maria
I am sure you will enhance our forum.

 
Welcome Maria.

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Michael (MV)