Paucity of space
where I can store
gifts and presentations,
make my house unkempt.
The racks overwhelm.
Vessels,boxes and baskets
of all sizes and materials
might crash any moment.
I chalk out an anteroom
near my parlour. Must have
racks partitions to arrange,
along with nice ventilation.
Adding a room is not cheap
I find, The cost exceeds
the value of gifts by thousands.
Not wisdom, I understand.
It is quits for now,
I will revive, perhaps,
when the receivables
surpass the expenditure.
It is business you discern.
Business As Usual
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Re: Business As Usual
Do you really need racks partitions? Rack partitions,is not the same thing?
Nice ventilation.This'nice' is not a nice word for poetry.Please change the adjective.
I find, The cost exceeds ('the' instead of The.)
It is business you discern,(.)
Nice ventilation.This'nice' is not a nice word for poetry.Please change the adjective.
I find, The cost exceeds ('the' instead of The.)
It is business you discern,(.)
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Re: Business As Usual
This is funny Meena
Re: Business As Usual
I know the situation. I like the humor.