Sevaka Beautiful Inlaw Prompt

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Sevaka Beautiful Inlaw Prompt

#1 Post by SivaRamanathan » 20 Jun 2020, 09:07

Sufi saints will give you a fresh lime to remove your worries
early in the morning, intoxicated with the smell of camphor.

Vishnu sleeps in my arms, anyone can see this as afternoon madness
and so, how can you ask me to go back to normal living?

Know well these are mendicants, fakirs, beggars of food '
and when they reach out for alms, their asking humbles their soul.

Sivakami Velliangiri
Sevaka—my nickname

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