I fall free
from the flat-line
I don't fall in line
I fall
in love
how could I
not care
that's how I fell in
for the fall
that is uplifting
to home free
eternally
"...therefore I am"
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Re: "...therefore I am"
I like the line “ I fall free from the flat-line”.
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Re: "...therefore I am"
Hi Bob,
After your workshop, that line has surfaced to the lead - Thanks
and I hope I have since evolved the poem.
Bob, in its current incarnation, do you think this poem could also represent the WB in the upcoming September IBPC? If so, please voice in the September IBPC thread at palaver:
viewtopic.php?f=3&t=7820
Thanks Bob,
Michael (MV)
After your workshop, that line has surfaced to the lead - Thanks
and I hope I have since evolved the poem.
Bob, in its current incarnation, do you think this poem could also represent the WB in the upcoming September IBPC? If so, please voice in the September IBPC thread at palaver:
viewtopic.php?f=3&t=7820
Thanks Bob,
Michael (MV)
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Re: "...therefore I am"
Michael
I second your poem.
Siva Ramanathan
I second your poem.
Siva Ramanathan
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