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Beggar's Lice

Posted: 19 Oct 2020, 16:10
by Kenneth2816
.First, the lush green

tendrils make

a basil rosette.

Beneath the wither

of summer

she brittles,

dispersing her little

ones, the stickseed,

onto the down

of a doe's coat

or between the

ribs of passing

corduroy,

to be reborn

as a mother on

the forest floor.

Re: Beggar's Lice

Posted: 20 Oct 2020, 07:15
by BobBradshaw
Nice nature piece...no criticisms... enjoyed

Re: Beggar's Lice

Posted: 20 Oct 2020, 19:27
by Billy
Short but never-ending cycle of a poem, thanks.

Re: Beggar's Lice

Posted: 21 Oct 2020, 03:02
by Michael (MV)
 
Hi Ken,

evolution of creativity

genesis -> metamorphosis -> maternity


from the forest floor
to be reborn
as mother



from maternity to eternity

8)

Michael (MV)

 
 
 
 

Re: Beggar's Lice

Posted: 24 Oct 2020, 08:19
by Kenneth2816
Thank you

Re: Beggar's Lice

Posted: 24 Oct 2020, 19:28
by meenas17
Theory of evolution in short.