October still-life : "I am with you always"

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Michael (MV)
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October still-life : "I am with you always"

#1 Post by Michael (MV) » 01 Nov 2020, 18:36

orange
scare
crow


orange
snow
man


from a blue-blood
sunny-moon
a red-orange glow

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Billy
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Re: triptych : Sunkin : "I am with you always"

#2 Post by Billy » 01 Nov 2020, 22:40

The bare bones, yet, the space is always with us.

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Re: October still-life : "I am with you always"

#3 Post by BobBradshaw » 03 Nov 2020, 22:10

well done, Michael

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