journalistic psalm: Thursday March 25, 2021

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Michael (MV)
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journalistic psalm: Thursday March 25, 2021

#1 Post by Michael (MV) » 31 Mar 2021, 00:36

 
Divine Providence:serendipity:poetic coincidence
The Lord is my Shepherd
No one does it more righteously


Instead of heading
out the front door,
my gut abruptly leads me
to the inner bathroom stall
Spirit move me
providing my being both
spontaneous relief and shelter
from the twisted storm

passing me . . . bye
to write this psalm -
another laud-lyric for the Lord
another bro-letter to the world - share the good news


Never belittle the entrails of a Buddha belly -
All works for the Glory of the Lord


 
 
 
 

BobBradshaw
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Re: journalistic psalm: Thursday March 25, 2021

#2 Post by BobBradshaw » 31 Mar 2021, 01:58

S1 is good, the irony, the surprise.

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