Tale Of A Liar And A Shrew

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meenas17
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Tale Of A Liar And A Shrew

#1 Post by meenas17 » 05 Apr 2021, 20:46

A squabble
between a wife
and her husband
one abusing the other
verbally and physically.
is the recent talk of the town,

She drives the man out
of his own house, hides his mobile,
behaves atrorcious, starves hi,
spats and screams, engages
in sly innuendos, making
life horrible.

To escape her brutality
he boozes, lies in geometrical
progressions, enters into
illicit relations, ruining
the family and losing
'credibility in the community.

The children treat him
like a doormat. He nurses
no remorse. Continues to live
as he wishes. The liar
and the shrew part ways.
meenas17

Kenneth2816
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Re: Tale Of A Liar And A Shrew

#2 Post by Kenneth2816 » 06 Apr 2021, 04:24

Damn

BobBradshaw
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Re: Tale Of A Liar And A Shrew

#3 Post by BobBradshaw » 06 Apr 2021, 08:18

Interesting pair. Very believable.

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