free spirit
that's what he called me
both of us bouncing in the bed
of an old pickup
the smell of manure
swirling around us
hitchhikers
friends for a mile or so
i grinned but didn't show it
he was young
didn't know the difference
between a free spirit
and a lost soul
i guess i didn't either
that was the beauty of it
not knowing
free spirit
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Re: free spirit
Another good one, Billy. I loved reading it.
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Re: free spirit
Hi Billy,
I Admire what All you have done(without crowding) in the small space of 15 short
lines, with a rich subtext..
No wonder it's also, on my short-list
Michael (MV)
I Admire what All you have done(without crowding) in the small space of 15 short
lines, with a rich subtext..
No wonder it's also, on my short-list
Michael (MV)
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Re: free spirit
Nice feint with line break on bed.
There is so much wisdom in this poem.
My first nom
There is so much wisdom in this poem.
My first nom