Remembering 9/11/2001 in 2021
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Remembering 9/11/2001 in 2021
If the Son sets you free, then you are free indeed --John 8:36
zero. The Freedom
to ground Tower
not fall like a flag
He did made of steel
rises
frames one thousand
in freeze
down seven hundred
the rubble seventy-six
rode feet above
One man ground zero
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Re: Remembering 9/11/2001 in 2021
Well done. I especially like this:
down down seven hundred
the rubble seventy-six
rode feet above
One man ground zero
down down seven hundred
the rubble seventy-six
rode feet above
One man ground zero
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Re: Remembering 9/11/2001 in 2021
Thanks, Bob,
for reading & commenting.
This poem needs to be read on a large screen; on a small device, such as my smartphone, the format does not appear as it should: as a left and a right column, or the left & right facades of a diptych.
Michael (MV)
for reading & commenting.
This poem needs to be read on a large screen; on a small device, such as my smartphone, the format does not appear as it should: as a left and a right column, or the left & right facades of a diptych.
Michael (MV)
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Re: Remembering 9/11/2001 in 2021
The original use of the word diptych was an alter piece with folding doors.
later used by artists for other painted works.
I see why the form can be called a diptych.
I wondered why I was thanked before I had commented. :0)
My Aberfan haiku was written in sympathy of 911.
Its good to remember in respect those still hurting from those terrible disasters
later used by artists for other painted works.
I see why the form can be called a diptych.
I wondered why I was thanked before I had commented. :0)
My Aberfan haiku was written in sympathy of 911.
Its good to remember in respect those still hurting from those terrible disasters