"Every tomb cenotaphic"

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Michael (MV)
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"Every tomb cenotaphic"

#1 Post by Michael (MV) » 15 Nov 2021, 12:57

The unknowns sung:

His Providence -
like daughters & sons
returning Home

BobBradshaw
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Re: "cenotaph"

#2 Post by BobBradshaw » 15 Nov 2021, 22:18

Nice, down to earth lines....

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Billy
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Re: "Every tomb cenotaphic"

#3 Post by Billy » 23 Nov 2021, 21:25

I like this one a lot.

FranktheFrank
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Re: "Every tomb cenotaphic"

#4 Post by FranktheFrank » 24 Nov 2021, 11:03

I don't think you need the word 'like'.

We are sons and daughters, so the word 'like' is superfluous.

Suggestion:

In His Providence
Returning Home singing praise
Known daughters and sons

Is it better to capitalize headings?

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