by Ieuan ap Hywel
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FranktheFrank
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BobBradshaw
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Re: Hindu Path to a Virtuous Life
What is this form called? It flows pretty well. I know you're following the requirements of a form, but there would be more impact if the poem was shorter, and therefore less repetition. I know, I know...the form. Sometimes it's good to break the rules. I like the concept.
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FranktheFrank
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Re: After a Virtuous Life
Sestina, Bob. Six lines in six stanza. I think I broke the rule a bit. Thanks Bob
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Michael (MV)
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Re: Hindu Path to a Virtuous Life
Hi Frank,
Much in accord with Bob.
Consider recasting as a pantoum.
Michael (MV)
Much in accord with Bob.
Consider recasting as a pantoum.
Michael (MV)
BobBradshaw wrote: ↑22 Dec 2021, 22:16What is this form called? It flows pretty well. I know you're following the requirements of a form, but there would be more impact if the poem was shorter, and therefore less repetition. I know, I know...the form. Sometimes it's good to break the rules. I like the concept.
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FranktheFrank
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Re: Removed for Publishing
It's been accepted for publishing, Michael. Should be out in April 2024