the big change
keep my mouth shut
then I’m never wrong
what do I really know
that could help someone
they don't want to hear me
my words runaway in fear
i've got an invisible straight
jacket binding the real me
the big picture is all i see
and it's not a pretty sight
i can't die in this condition
i've got another death to live
the big change
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Kenneth2816
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Re: the big change
I like the last line. This reads like a mystery and as such, I can't figure out what the big change is.
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BobBradshaw
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Re: the big change
I really like that last stanza. Not sure what the big change is either. Maybe a different title would clarify things.
Re: the big change
Maybe the pronoun change will clarify