Found Ekphrastic
The engine purrs,
Kenny changes gear
the exhaust lets out a whoop
of throaty triumph.
Killing Them Softly
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- Location: Between the mountains and the sea
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Re: Killing Them Softly
Lots of good writing here. Too many lines to quote. The bolder lines throw me. They don’t seem needed, and break up the flow.
Sorry to hear about health problems. That’s the first priority. Take care, Ieuan.
Sorry to hear about health problems. That’s the first priority. Take care, Ieuan.
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- Posts: 1987
- Joined: 02 Mar 2016, 18:07
- Location: Between the mountains and the sea
Re: Killing Them Softly
Dank je wel, Bob.