"from maternity to Eternity"

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Michael (MV)
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"from maternity to Eternity"

#1 Post by Michael (MV) » 25 Jul 2022, 01:49

 
We come to the Father
by way of the Son
;
but there is no son without the mother.


July 15, 2022 -
The 9th anniversary of our Mother
receiving her Miracle Lift

like a child borne out of the sleeper

for deliverance from here
and the 1st for her first born
big brother receiving his

and being delivered
to find mother
There too
expecting all of her children
in Our Father's nursery


on earth as it is in Heaven
There is no maternity leave
 
 
 
 

 

BobBradshaw
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Re: "from maternity to Eternity"

#2 Post by BobBradshaw » 26 Jul 2022, 05:20

Tender and imaginative…

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Billy
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Re: "from maternity to Eternity"

#3 Post by Billy » 26 Jul 2022, 06:37

Yes, the Mother. I, too, find it tender and profound, whether a Christian or not.

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