Video-Portrait of Michael approaching 65

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Michael (MV)
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Video-Portrait of Michael approaching 65

#1 Post by Michael (MV) » 01 Sep 2022, 18:42

Strolling through the 24th Sidewalk Film Festival,
behind black & blue shades,
sporting a black mask & arm sling

Stitches backstage
curtained on the lower left side

The ones holding the skin flap in place -
Think Jack Nicholson in "China Town "

The jaw-dropping hematoma stain -
"Oh, that's just fresh ink of an abstract tattoo."

BobBradshaw
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Re: Video-Portrait of Michael approaching 65

#2 Post by BobBradshaw » 01 Sep 2022, 21:09

This is terrific. Quite a portrait here! Is it too late for a nom for this month? If not, I would like to nom it.

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