Oncology Ward

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FranktheFrank
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Oncology Ward

#1 Post by FranktheFrank » 14 Mar 2023, 03:24

Cold blue night at dawn
Waiting for the pain to ease
Is this how life ends
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BobBradshaw
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Re: Oncology Ward

#2 Post by BobBradshaw » 14 Mar 2023, 04:54

Good, short piece.
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Kenneth2816
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Re: Oncology Ward

#3 Post by Kenneth2816 » 14 Mar 2023, 18:09

This is stark and has the brevity of one who now
counts every minute.
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