supposed not to concern us
i was whisked away by inner storms
blown to the end of myself and back
alighting on my feet most of the time
like a superman of the Nietsche type
not the kryptonite de-weaponized one
i survived war-torn bedazzled by luck
or providence whistling down the road
to redemption or death all the same
wanting to be loved even when I knew
that wasn't it not the one i had known
the real thing hid in the grass like a
tiny creature afraid to come out not
accustomed to man-handling and
show, better a coaxing tender voice
aware of the creature's shock and
its fragile body its fragile world hidden
within this outer one and just as real
avoiding the thoughtless steps of others
supposed not to concern us
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Re: supposed not to concern us
I am blown away by that imaginative opening stanza.
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Re: supposed not to concern us
All the final three stanzas work for me. I am still pondering over the ,'wasn't it not', to understand what it really means.
Siva
Can you please request Michael to show me how to rejoin.
Siva
Can you please request Michael to show me how to rejoin.