September IBPC 2017 Poems (Congrats Bernie 2nd Place)

[Michael (MV)]

 
Congrats to The Writer's Block - Thanks Bernie for bringing another IBPC recognition to the WB.



and Congrats to our fellow-poets recognized from other IBPC boards, especially

to Siva for the 3rd Place poem.


September IBPC poems selected by Tim Mayo with commentary:

http://ibpc.webdelsol.com/2017/09





Michael (MV)


 

 
 
  
 
 
  
 

[FranktheFrank]

Congratulations Bernie
very well done, second place marvellous.

Congratulations to all who were placed from other boards.

[SivaVelliangiri]

Congratulations Bernie and all those who were placed from other boards.

Thank you Michael and Bernie and Frank.

Frank you are always right when it comes to editing. Seeing so many commas in the last stanza --I wish I had removed all those commas, then there would not have been so many pauses and the meaning would have been clearer.

S

[Kenneth2816]

Congrats and appreciation to Bernie. Very proud.

[Kenneth2816]

And Siva....congrats to you as well

[SivaVelliangiri]

Thank you Kenneth.

[meenas17]

Congrats, Bernie. You deserve it.

[Gracy321]

Fantastic, Bernie! Great poem, well deserved recognition.

Also, congrats to Siva, representing another board.

I just read all the poems and Tim Mayo's comments. Thanks for link, MV.

Best to all,
Gracy

[SivaVelliangiri]

Thank you Gracy.

Siva

[BobBradshaw]

Congrats, Bernie! You deserved recognition for such a gorgeous piece...best

[FranktheFrank]

Commas or not, you won a good placing Siva
and you deserved it. If it wasn't for the maestro
you would have been second.

Commas can wait, 3rd places are rare.

[Bernie01]

Guys---

Gosh.

sorry to be so slow as...can be. must be my age.

bernie