Beneath

[abhrksht]

Beneath
I hope beneath that allure
Is a girl somewhere
Obscure in those eyes
The solitude of delight

I find in her words
The calm in all disquiet
I sprinkle the words tonight
To soothe all despair

I hope beneath those eyes
Is my solace somewhere
Lost endlessly in them
I live a thousand lives

I hope when she sees me
A smile brushes her lips
She looks into me
And sees all I see.

[Smmrtmestos]

Great job! It's very deep.

[Smmrtmestos]

love the "live a thousand lives" part

[Smmrtmestos]

Check out my poem/song "all about me"/ others too and tell me what you think!! Thanks!

[meenas17]

it is beautifully done,
meenas