Is Love Like A Sniff Of Cocaine?

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SivaRamanathan
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Is Love Like A Sniff Of Cocaine?

#1 Post by SivaRamanathan »

I start dancing
on the ceiling.
Merry-go- round
on the old Orient fan
cobwebs for angel dust...
I don't have sufficient
mental ballast to come down.

Michael (MV)
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Re: Is Love Like A Sniff Of Cocaine?

#2 Post by Michael (MV) »

Hi Siva,

I immediately heard this:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Aol_h_-24bs


8)

Michael (MV)

 
 
 
 
 

SivaRamanathan
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Re: Is Love Like A Sniff Of Cocaine?

#3 Post by SivaRamanathan »

Thanks for sending the link.Played it several times.Much enjoyed.

ryan
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Re: Is Love Like A Sniff Of Cocaine?

#4 Post by ryan »

Relying on the title to carry the fabula/sujet just doesn't work for me. Perhaps it was meant to be a fun piece without the burden of narrative construction except nothing fun or new here -- for me at least. Thanks for trying

SivaRamanathan
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Re: Is Love Like A Sniff Of Cocaine?

#5 Post by SivaRamanathan »

ryan

You are right.

Siva

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