a photojournalism:
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Michael (MV)
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Life exhumed with the Light
flat lines aren't finish lines
buried alive in the body bag of a serpent's belly
Re: a photojournalism:
M---
kill the last line---no connection to light and it's a poor man dylan thomas...
but the first two lines, now we got something going.
consider making a passing reference to antiquity...challenge yourself...write five more lines....
bernie
kill the last line---no connection to light and it's a poor man dylan thomas...
but the first two lines, now we got something going.
consider making a passing reference to antiquity...challenge yourself...write five more lines....
bernie